Week 11: Review on Presentation Group 7 Remuneration

Review on presentation of group 7: REMUNERATION

 

Group Name: Vivid Pirates

Group Topic: Remuneration
Grade:  CR

Clarity of the oral presentation

The presentation was really interesting. They picked up some really interesting topic of remuneration to present and explained the concept quite well to get the audience understand what are they touching on.All the group members spoke quite fast which made it hard for me to catch up what they are saying. It was loud but too fast at some point. It would be better if they slow down the pace quite a bit. The concept, components and key ideas of remuneration were  explained and pointed out in this presentation.

Clarity of the written presentation

The text written in the presentation was very long and was not necessary. Text for the presentation should be constructed in dot point form or short sentences. This is to make audience get the idea what are you talking about. By having that much text and the fast talking, it can confuse the audience what they should be focusing on. Prezi does allow user to zoom in or focus on the slide, having short sentence and zoom in while talking might be a good solution for this.

Distinctiveness and specificity of the examples

I like the idea that the group brought up a personal example in their personal life. It help support me to understand what the topic are about and what is the meaning of the term. However the example is nothing relate to the project itself. We might be looking for something that actually relate to the project rather than a personal payslip.

Reference

There was a reference in the presentation but poorly presented. With the color and size of text it makes the reference became almost invisible. Reference should be written clearly to credit the source of the information. There was also some image that were not reference.

The conceptual context

The presentation shows that the group have done a level of research putting all the content into the presentation. They have showed that they understand all the term and meaning of the remuneration. They picked up an example really well to demonstrate their knowledge of the given topic. Applying this to the project will even push their conceptual context even better.

The still image

The images in the presentation was the best part of the whole. It really make the presentation interesting and relate to the topic they are talking about. The image was in high resolution, clear and linked to the speech they are proposing. This is a good level of still image that they have.

Overall presentation was interesting and also explain well in term of concept and ideas toward the topic. I have a very little understanding of this topic but they have made me understand more about the term remuneration and all the example really help support the idea and what they were trying to explain. With a better reference and better written text structure along with the content linking to their project would make this presentation one of the most interesting one.